Legal Theft Project: Between the Luster and the Gloaming

He rambled in the wilder lands, paying homage to no lord of darkness, no lady of light. His were the tangled and the natural things, the beasts and the birds, the trees whose leaves whispered secrets to travelers, and the false lights that lead them astray. His domain a place between the gloaming and the luster, wreathed in mist, and filled with wilder things than dwell in the courts both dark and light. From beneath the trees he watched the civilized sides quarrel and marked their passing, but until that day, he stayed out of their squabbles. Better suited to hunt and roam, and discover the wonders of his wild range.

Until one day their quarrels raged. Raged and spread. The sun vanished that day. Night fell over every land and chaos reigned. But briefly, before the stars were banished and light scathed back across the lands. The night and the day were at war, beyond song, beyond skirmish, if the whole of the realms fell with them, they cared not a jot. He stood frozen nearly too long before he let loose the howl to call his creatures to him. Perhaps some in the fight heard, but the leaders cared not and so were unprepared when their spells went awry, when the beasts of fang and claw and wing descended, following their lord.

The battle is one of which no one speaks. There are few things more unsettling to the folk of the realms than the prospect of non-existence, of how close the whole lot of them came to the edge. The horde disperses. The courts of the fair, light and dark, go home to seethe and resent. The wild ones scatter. And the lord of the wilds turns his back on the courts, going deep into the untamed. Speaking to none. No one has seen him since. Though every once and awhile, when the fighting gets too intense, the undergrowth growls, and those who fight, pause.


A thief am I! I stole the line “The sun vanished that day.” from a diplomat with a machete. And I’m not the only one…. check out her post to see who else nicked the line.

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Legal Theft Project: Shapes Shift in Water

He tipped his hat to her, ignoring the way it allowed rain to sluice down his neck. The lady appreciated the gesture with a smile before they parted ways, her safe under her umbrella. It felt like rain was still pouring through him. The visions had been coming faster and his head was so full of the possibilities that it was a wonder he didn’t crack. He needed a break, he needed to deal with his thoughts.

So, despite the rain, he walked home. Across the shining wet cobbles, letting the raindrops pummel his hat, his coat, the rest of him. The hat brim could only do so much and drops caught on his lashes. His hair made a wet rat tail over the back of his coat. He looked more dishevelled than he’d ever been in public before, but who would be looking? Or recognize him if they did? So he walked on, sorting through his head and letting the frantic energy of the last few weeks sluice away with the rain. By the time he got to his front gate, his head was as clear. Like a deep pool of water, not empty, but still. Thoughts dropped onto the surface like rain, but most of them got no further or were dealt with easily. Go inside. Take off the coat. Remove the boots. Leave them in the mud room. Doff the hat, leave it on the bannister. Go to one’s room. Get your sketch book. Sit in front of the fire. Draw.

The images flowed like a river. A scene of fire. Smoke drifting over a field, a house in the background, burning. People in front of it, swords drawn, pistols discarded. Pain. He shaded the shadows long. Finished, he turned the page to another. A night scene, a balcony, the party inside, the two figures on the balcony enjoying the night together, rather than the glitter inside. Page after page he filled, listening to the drum of the rain on the roof. Finally, he turned the page, and nothing came. His curse satisfied, he settled in to draw his current project.

On the page, the face of a lady took shape under an umbrella. Dark curls, delicate face, stubborn tilt to her chin. It was not the lady he had accompanied earlier. He looked at the face on his page and realized he might not be treading water.


Picked the first line of this piece out of Kid‘s pocket. It isn’t just a first line, clever thieves have hidden it in various places. Take a look.

Legal Theft Project: Rest in the Rain

Rain drowned the world in white noise.

Shedding his black coat and hat in the entryway to his home, the hard holder shivers. He is not immune to the cold and the damp, he only pretends it away when his people can see him. He sits down on the bench and removes his boots, placing them carefully in the tray just for them. He can hear the radio from the living room and sees the warm glow of a fire. Before giving in to the warmth, he drifts into the bedroom. His wife’s clothes are jumbled on the end of the bed as if she could not decide what to wear and so tried everything before she settled on something. It makes him smile as he picks them up and puts them away before taking out a sweater and slipping it on. He pulls the curtains closed on the grey grey day and goes back to the beckoning warmth of the fire. His wife smiles when he comes in and he lets the iron in his spine relax. He pours them both a drink and sits down with her in front of the fire.

Rain drowned the world in white noise.

The soldier, still lost, lets it wash all other thoughts from her head. She has not had peace since she woke up from the ice and the rain makes it easier to pretend. She sits back and takes care of her guns, watching the mechanic tinker with things she used to know the names of, now made strange and ethereal by the light and the man who twists them to do impossible tasks. She misses sitting in the barracks, playing cards with her fellows, bickering about assignments on similar rainy days. Back when the world was ordered. Back before storms and white noise were similar. Back when wolves only had one name. Rain at least, rain is the same. So she protects the items from her past and meditates on her place in the future, now that there is no army, no city, no country, to claim her.

Rain drowned the world in white noise.

Under the miraculous clear roof, the dedicate watches the rain. He’s met the springs, the sea, the fog, and the rain. While the springs may have his heart, the rains are a flirt, at times dangerous, at others delightful, and only time will tell which is which. Dry under the greenhouse roof, he tends to the flowers and vegetables, singing. His voice accompanies the scattered rushes of raindrops and rises and falls in time. When his work is complete, he walks out into the rain, letting it wash over him in chill sheets. It blinds him, but he knows the ways of his domain well and he makes it to the springs. He wades into the steam and the warm water with a smile. Water takes and water gives. And he is content to follow where it flows.

Rain drowned the world in white noise.

For the first time in a long time, the driver is not waiting out the rain in her car. Her car is safe under her custom tarp, though it does not keep the driver from the occasional worry when she glances out the window at the sheets of rain. The room is smoky and close with people lounging and dicing, playing cards and chatting. The radio plays lowly in the background, something moody and slow. Her brother is on a stool at the bar, flirting with the bartender. For his part, the bartender smiles and puts the finishing touches on something warm and steaming that smells of apples and better days. She walks over and takes a seat next to her brother and earns her own flash of a smile. They talk and the driver forgets to worry about her car. They are not talking of much, but it has been too long since she spent a day out of the rain. A day safe with other people, and not worried about what would happen when the rain lifts. At least while it rains, tomorrow and its roads will wait. At least for now, she can pretend she has a home.

Rain drowned the world in white noise. And the world slowed. And the wolves went home. And all, for now, was quiet, was well. For now.


Thieves abound! and stole this rainy first line to write their own pieces. Take a look! Completely independently that machete happy diplomat and I ended up with eerily similar pieces.

Legal Theft Project: Disbelief, Teeth, and Dramatic Escapes

He pivoted left, letting the blade pass harmlessly a breath from his ribs, and felt their rage and terror pour into him. More palace guards were entering the courtyard to engage his small crew and their insane battle toward the sea wall. Felix couldn’t manage to laugh as he dodged another strike from the guards. Val had lost half of his stolen guard armor, which was great for identifying him, but possibly a detriment to his protection. Their friend the other guard was busy carrying the now unconscious Shadrian and unlocking things that should not be unlocked. How that person was doing so was not apparent to Felix.

Kate came up on his right and engaged the guards trying to kill Felix. “You know, paying attention and quipping annoyingly would come in handy right about now, Captain,” she said between strikes.

Felix blinked. “I… I’m out of practice.”

“Improvise!” Kate demanded as she disarmed a guard. She kicked the guard’s blade into Felix’s hand and returned to holding the line for the retreat. Felix grabbed the hilt out of habit, and parried mechanically. They weren’t going to make it. There was nothing around that he could use to … to change anything. Damnit, this wasn’t how his final chapter was supposed to go! “I ask again, what in the seven watery realms are the lot of you doing here, Kate?”

She shot him an ‘oh-heavens-not-this-again’ look and continued fighting. A blade got through her guard and nicked her cheek lightly. Felix didn’t know if it was luck or skill that it was so light.

“Seriously, this is your dramatic escape? Try to kidnap a wicked monarch and get murdered on the way to jump off a wall. Toward the sea? Even if we make it, we can’t swim that far.” Felix swatted a guard’s blade away, but wasn’t fast enough to quite avoid the graze to his arm.

“He still complaining?” Val called over the din. “Told you we should have shoved some whiskey down his throat. He’d be better off a tad soused.”

“He’d be a worse swordsman,” Kate called back. She surveyed the field and the crossbowmen setting up on the balconies. “Call Mel, we can’t wait any longer.”

“Works for me!” Val replied. He put his fingers between his teeth and let out a deafening whistle. Nothing happened for a couple beats of battle, then a dark shadow fell over the courtyard. The palace guards slowed their pursuit. The crossbowmen shot, but their bolts all shattered against the scales of the looming sea serpent whose head continued to rise over the sea wall. Holding onto the serpent’s crest for balance was Mel. Mel scanned the ground and spoke to the sea serpent, not that anyone on the ground could hear what she said. Kate stepped back from the conflict, grinning. “Okay everyone. We are going to go join our good friend Dakuwaquan, one of the seven lords of the seas, and as long as no one bothers us, we will leave your royal pain in the ass, right on that battlement. Got it?”

For his part, Dakuwaquan smiled. With teeth. Lots and lots of teeth. The palace guards retreated.

Val, Kate, Felix, and their new friend carrying the unconscious Shadrian all got up to the palace wall below the sea serpent’s head with no issue. At which point, Mel tossed down a rope and Val clambered up. Their new friend followed him up. Kate and Felix had a staring match to determine who would climb next. Felix lost to Kate’s unflinching gaze. While Felix was climbing, Kate leaned down and made sure the unconscious royal pain was secure. Then she patted his head and ascended the rope. Everyone was a little crowded, sea serpent heads were slippery and not intended for booted feet. However, they managed jaunty farewells and Mel whispered to Dakuwaquan.

The sea serpent rose a few more feet, taking himself off the wall and moved away. Slowly sinking into deeper water, until just his head and the people on it, were above the water. Felix watched the palace fade behind them and surveyed the sea serpent and the ocean as they swam further out into the sea.

“Mel,” he said mildly, “What in the stars did you offer our friend here?”

Mel looked up at her captain. “He had a craving for banana bread.”

Felix raised an eyebrow in disbelief.

Val nodded. “Mel made a loaf the size of a house. He ate the whole thing. Took an island’s worth of bananas.” Val continued tossing bits and pieces of palace guard armor into the sea. He ditched the gambeson too. He looked more like Val.

Felix looked over his friends, all stubbornly pleased with themselves. Except… “Hello friend, I’m Captain Felix Garret and I’m usually better at introductions during daring rescues, but I will admit I have never been the rescued before. A pleasure to meet you.” He bowed to the newest apparent addition to the band.

The armored figure waved. Felix looked to Kate who shook her head. “Nope, not enough time for that story.”

“Not in the slightest,” Val agreed.

Mel nodded emphatically.

The armored figure shrugged.

Dakuwaquan nodded in agreement. Those standing on his head all lunged for a hand hold on his crest. Everyone laughed.

“Alright everyone,” Kate said. “The sun is setting, the mood is right, please strike your successful daring rescue poses as we approach the ship and prepare for debarking.”

Val laughed and picked up Mel to sit on his shoulders. The armored figure balanced carefully so as to appear nonchalant and immovable. Kate adjusted her hand hold on the sea serpent’s crest and held out her other hand to Felix. “Captain?”

“Damn.” Felix grinned a bit of his old outrageous grin. “It’s good to be back.” He took Kate’s hand and turned to face the horizon. Dramatically.


I stole this first line from Kid. It got away from me a bit. See who else was dodging blades over here.

Legal Theft Project: Coins, Confidence, and Kidnapping

“Heads I win, tails you lose, your choice.” Shadrian flipped an ancient coin between his fingers, smiling. Relaxed in his throne like chair and flanked by hulking guards, faceless in their full plate. Captain Felix knelt in front of his nemesis and glared, but it was a muted thing.

“What, Felix, aren’t you feeling lucky?”

“I was merely respecting your binary. Otherwise I choose the edge.”

Shadrian laughed. “Of course you would. Ever the contrarian. Well, let’s see if your luck still holds… I’ll enjoy the outcome either way.” Shadrian flipped the coin into the air. Felix watched it, hypnotized. He’d spent so much of his life chasing gold and ignoring the odds, it seemed fitting that the two together would be the end chapter for him. All luck runs out. Gold can’t go with you when you die. Edge over edge the coin turned.

Then an armor clad fist snatched it out of the air. Shadrian and Felix glanced in shock at the guard. “Okay guys, this is taking way too long. And I hate this get up.” The guard tossed the coin to his partner who caught it and tucked it away.

“What in the name of the four-”

“We’re foiling your evil plans.” A female voice interrupted, the woman herself strolled in through the side door to the audience chamber. “Coin never hits the ground, luck doesn’t matter, does it?”

Felix blinked at Kate, mouth slightly open. She walked over to her captain and neatly severed the ties on his wrists and ankles. Shadrian rose in protest before each of his guards placed a hand on his shoulder. The guard who had grabbed the coin removed his helmet. “That’s enough out of you, you overgrown pickle,” he told Shadrian, and placed the helmet on Shadrian’s head, muffling any further protests. Val shook his hair free and grinned at Felix. “You look like a fish.”

“You are going to get us all killed,” Felix said, throat dry. Kate and Val glared at him simultaneously.

“Big words from you, idiot,” Kate said. Val started to frog march Shadrian down the stairs with the help of the other guard.

“Come on Felix,” Kate continued. “We have to make a daring escape. Mel’s gonna be pissed if we’re late.”


I am a thief who held onto this first line for a long time. I stole from Kid, who left that wood gate open. Look here to see what everyone else wrote.

Legal Theft Project: Something That We’re Not

“So, after all that, You don’t care?”

Bastion looked at her, looked at the crowd of onlookers, at the hired band. Looked back at her. “Jen…” Bastion put a hand over his face for a moment. “Will you come over here? I don’t want to shout.”

“Bastion, anything you have to say to me can be said in public. I’m not ashamed of what I feel. Neither should you!”

Bastion took a deep breath and prepared to make an idiot of himself in public. Again. He drew on his high school theater training and projected his voice. Stopped. Held up a hand to the crowd as he began to mess with his phone.

“You know, you didn’t give me a way to respond appropriately to such an… epic… presentation. I’m gonna do my best here.”

The crowd cheered at him going along with the gimmick and Jen beamed at him, still in her glittery costume from the, well, broadway musical number that had just happened in the middle of the quad. However, Disney princess he was not. He shrugged, “Youtube ads, what can you do?” Then he pumped the volume on his phone and made a mini speaker and blasted “Something That We’re Not” karaoke by an alumni of disney. He had a good voice, and knew enough of the lyrics not to look incredibly stupid.

Jen turned red, then teary, then banished the tears with her fury. The crowd, now equal parts her friends, his friends, and passers by who found the whole thing hilarious, was too evenly matched to start something that wouldn’t end in a riot. Which would not be appropriate at noon on the front quad. Jen and her friends retreated to the art dorm as he finished singing and Bastion took himself off to his next class, shaking his head.

One of his friends walked up to him. “Dude, you have the worst luck with exes.”

“She’s not an ex. We didn’t date.”

His friend snorted. “You’ve had more beer dumped on you by angry chicks, than any other guy I know.”

Bastion laughed. “Fair. But I’m gonna count myself well off so long as none of them try to kill me.”


I stole this first line from Bek. Look around for other thieves!

Legal Theft Project: The Harlequin’s Day

He capered across the wall and those rising to start their tasks looked away from him. Some mornings he was more of a spectacle than others, yet everyone pretended not to notice. When he came to the corner of the wall, the man in a harlequin mask ceased his capering and draped himself into the crenelation. A thin knife flicked around his knuckles as he idled and watched the goings on in the square.

Time passed, and a merchant got into an altercation with a buyer. Voices raised, faces red, and blows imminent, until the harlequin dropped lazily from the wall and strolled by them. Knife sheathed, he tapped his fingers against the hilt. Silence followed him. He paused and tilted his head back at the arguers. The conversation resumed, much subdued.

So went the morning, the man wandered, and in his wake, people banded together. A woman and her daughter were tending their vegetable garden and they froze when he passed them by. The hand on his knife stopped tapping and he gave them a clumsy bow. The woman put an arm in front of her daughter, and shook her head at the man. He made a negative sign with his hand and stumbled back a few paces. He bowed more deeply and more sincerely, before turning and striding briskly away.

His steps brought him to the keep where a bearded man in fine clothes was talking with merchants. The harlequin man stayed within view, but at a distance, and leaned against the wall. Flipping his knife. Swish, flick, flash. Swish, flick, flash. The business was soon concluded and the bearded man nodded to him. The harlequin man fell in at his shoulder, a pace of so behind, and shadowed him through his walks and meetings. Close to dusk, the bearded man gave a quiet order. The man in the harlequin mask saluted him and jogged off into the dusk. For once, his knife was silent.


Some literary thieves have run off with this first line. See what they did with their capering gentlemen here.

Legal Theft Project: The Measure of Help

Kimball was dashing through the game room when he saw something odd. As he didn’t know what exactly what it was he saw, he doubled back to check and make sure he wasn’t hallucinating or something. Nope. His friend was still there, and still had… “You have something furry on your back.”

“Fuzzy. I have many fuzzy somethings on my back,” was the response from Rell. “Technically, in my hood, not on my back. Which is the reason I am not currently out patrolling.”

Kimball hooked his mask onto the loop on his belt and wandered over. He looked into the fabric nest and down at the four sleeping kittens nestled there in and let out the most sincere awwww. “They’re adorable. Are they okay? Are you taking them to a shelter? Are you adopting them? Were they the witnesses to a robbery?”

Rell was staying mostly still and looking through his phone. “Yes. No. No. And I have no idea. They were alone, cold, and I have no idea where to find the nearest no kill shelter, or animal rescue center.” He held up his hand as Kimball opened his mouth. “No we are not setting up a drive, we are not going as our masked personas to hand out kittens to random people. I will donate to the shelter, but I am …. I…” Rell trailed off and Kimball kicked back on his heels. Rell listened to the soft purr of contented kittens.

“I needed the reminder that I can save people without a mask, okay?” Rell said.

Kimball nodded slowly and perched on the arm of the couch. “I can get you a couple numbers. I’ve volunteered before.”

“You should still patrol.”

Kimball shrugged. “The others will cover it. You can’t fight the scale. Tonight, you need a friend, and kittens need a home. We can foil super villain plots another night.”

Rell handed his phone to Kimball. “Thanks.”

“Don’t mention it.”

“I won’t- and if they ask you…”

Kimball grinned. “What?”

Rell shoved at him, gently so as not to disturb the kittens.

“We were patrolling, found some little stuff, took care of it. The End.” Kimball said and smiled.


I am a thief! I stole the line “You have something furry on your back.” and wrote a bit of fluff around it. Click on the line to see who else stole it what what other furry things were identified or misidentified.

Legal Theft Project: Lost in a Song

There were stories about her kind, stories old as islands and only slightly younger than the names of the stars. As she walked the shore, tide curling around her ankles, she sang. Pouring rippling waves of sound, draping the evening in an otherworldly cloth as her blue black dress clung to her sinuous curves. Stars began to dot the velvet dark of the sky and she made no attempt to disguise her nature. Her skin glinted with sharp edged scales, her teeth were too long and sharp in her aquiline face, and the perfect piercing notes she sang could never have come from a mortal throat.

In nearby villages and towns, doors closed, shutters latched, and parents made sure their children were safely inside. However no one felt the tug to go to the sea, for all the stories, there was no beckon in the siren’s voice, not that night. Hushed conversations around stoked fires wondered if she mourned, others said she was marking out a territory and hunts would begin in earnest later. Yet others posited that she was stood up by her love, her sisters had died, or she had been dealt a wrong by a man on the coast and she was calling him out in challenge.

None were correct, the siren herself barely knew why she’d come here, and why she was crying to the heavens. Unless for the sense of fruitless eternity that could sneak up on any immortal when you paid too much attention to time. So she wandered further and farther down the shore, the waves erasing her footsteps behind her.


I am a thief, a very greedy thief who held onto this line stolen from Gwen for a long time. Take a look at the other old stories here.

Legal Theft Project: Effects of a Frozen Heart

The last thread of humanity broke and he collapsed into the explosion of power. Not many people noticed the moment it happened. They only witnessed the aftermath of that last bit of warmth leaving his eyes. Inside, the cold expanded to fill his veins and it nearly sang with potential, now that the last limiter no longer applied. Outside, he walked calmly down the stairs to the meeting chamber. The dozen politicians and diplomats he’d been meeting with for the past three months, and debating the future of nations, rose as he entered. He walked to his place at the head of the table and stood in front of his chair. He waited. In a few moments the conversations stilled and all eyes turned to look at him. But the atmosphere in the room hadn’t shifted, the impatience, the self importance, and the combative spirit still bubbled around the edges. It would not do.

“We have been pushing around useless hot air for a quarter of a year. The only progress made has been minimal, pointless, and outside the scope of the work we announced we would be doing. The world does not have time for this speed of progress.” His clipped level voice had everyone’s attention. A few of the dignitaries who knew him a little better than the others had narrowed their eyes, trying to determine what had changed about him. He continued, hands clasped loosely at his waist, posture straight and formal, but not stiff. “In the next four hours we are going to change that. No one is going to like the document, but I no longer care about the posturing, bickering, and self entitlement from anyone in this room. We will create the treaty, and it will be binding.”

The silence hung for a moment before being broken by various expressions of disbelief. One of the more self involved dignitaries tried the door and found it locked. “What is the meaning of this?” the dignitary demanded.

The man at the front of the room sat down in his chair. “It means, dignitaries, that if in the next four hours you wish to leave with your heads still attached to your shoulders, we will come to an agreement.” He let the silence ring a minute. “Is that clear enough for you?” The slight uptick at the side of his mouth was not reassuring.

“I won’t stand for this madness.” One of the dignitaries in the room declared. “You are not my liege lord, and-”

The man at the head of the room turned to the side and said clearly, “Captain, fetch me my pistol. And have another brace standing by.” He turned back to the room to see the dignitary turning red and opening his mouth to bluster. Before he could blow out any hot air, the man continued, “If you impede the progress of this treaty for another minute, I will have you arrested. I am done with this circus.” He hadn’t raised his voice or risen from his chair and a number of the dignitaries were beginning to sink back into their seats, eyes stuck on him, but the cold in the man’s voice was finally dispensing their bluster and intransigence.

“If you insist on treating this conclave as a blustering posturing farce, then I will end it and emerge the victor. If you want to get work done, then cut the bullshit, put your cards on the table, and we can all negotiate from positions of honesty. Which is better for all of our nations, not to mention everyone’s personal health.” His eyes swept the table.  The last remaining blusterers sank into their seats and everyone looked at everyone else. Finally, one woman began to speak, laying out her country’s absolute necessities and possible concessions. Then another. Then another. And they all studiously ignored when the guard captain returned with the cold eyed man’s pistol.


I am a thief who stole this first line from Kid awhile back. Take a look at other explosions of power over here.